Alan Makar
Prof. McCormick
ENG103
24, October 2010
Research Paper
Basis of Argument
• Argument-I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the State of New York.
• Premise 1- Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport.
• Premise 2- Given, the UFC has a code of conduct and rules.
Conclusion- It follows then, that the UFC is a safe sport.
Brief History/ intro-
In the past throughout history, our world that we have come to know has always had some sort of entertainment. We could have carelessly cared how "violent" it really was. Rewinding to the past to ancient Rome people/citizens were put in an arena with beasts twice their individual size for pure enjoyment/punishment. Did we care then? No, we just stood in suspense to see if the tables would be turned; if the "man" would come out as a "warrior". As the philosopher Rousseau would say "Nature never deceives us; it is we who deceive ourselves", honestly we all want to see people compete because we, ourselves are not capable of competing on that level. We sometime foolishly abide with what maybe morally right to others rather than our thoughts. We rather side with the norm rather than ask why? Or express our true feeling.
"Gladiators", warriors once known for their fierce character competed in arm combat to see who would be the last man standing. However, nowadays we have something similar, an organization called "Ultimate Fighting Championship" (UFC), where experienced martial artists/wrestlers, compete within an octagon. To be announced the "ultimate fighter"(within their weight class). Although this sport has proven to take place in our history since 264 B.C. New York has still addressed it as being forbidden within the state, for its violence which was referred to as "Human cock fighting" as Senator John McCain would state. But, this is misleading notion; in this essay I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the state of New York. Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport, given; the UFC has a code of conduct and rules. It then follows that the UFC is a safe sport.
Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport. In karate, one must follow codes of conduct. One example is the "Bushido code", which means the warrior spirit, is followed by karate and judo practitioners. There are 7 virtues: rectitude, courage, benevolence, respect, honesty, honor, and loyalty. Martial artist that accept that the 7 virtues constructs a positive character.(Martial Art Hall of Warrior Training). These positive behaviors create a safer environment for practitioners, in the sense that they are more likely to demonstrate an honorable/noble character when competing. For example being “humble in victory” and “gracious in defeat” is most emphasized in my Dojo especially to the younger kids. If this is not taught to them, you can imagine the tension between both practitioners.
Not only do codes of conduct come into sight in martial arts but also in boxing. One of their codes of conduct is that, the competitor must be "within 5% of his competition weight prior to competition or 8% pounds within his competition weight for training camp 30 days out from competition"(USOC.org) This is most essential because without weight classes, the fight would be considered unfair to both competitors, one having an advantage. A competitor who outweighs the opposing fighter would have a greater force that is conducted throughout his punches, because more mass equals greater force. No matter how skilled the fighter, when in contact with the punch, he will end up suffering and struggling to continue the fight. Even sometime height is also taken into consideration. This is taken into account because of the fighter’s vulnerability to exposing himself (jaw wise). Can you imagine a fighter having to look up at his target? The match would end by knockout majority of the time.
Also, in major league baseball, if a pitcher hits a batter 3 times in a game, he is ejected from the game for safety precautions of the other players. Rather than leaving the pitcher within the game and leaving it to the probability of the pitcher hitting the batter with 90 mile per hour fast ball on his head he is taken out for the rest of game.
During every match of the UFC, there is always a "cut-man" and physician. They work hand in hand. Cut-men have the authority to address the physician with concerns regarding an injury. If the physician believes the injury is threatening to the fighter the match will come to an end. Fighters are to respect the physician’s decision and cannot dispute the decision. The cut-man is, the person that heals the fighter’s cuts and applies the Vaseline or any necessary precaution that must be taken for fighters benefit. The physicians’ duty is to evaluate the health and condition of the fighter. (Goodman) A clear example of this dates back to the earlier days of UFC, when it was under title of “Pride”. A fighter by the name of “Kuzshi Sakuraba” faced off against “Wanderlei Silva” In the pay-perview event “Pride17”, both were middle weight competitors. However Silva ended up breaking Sakuraba’s collar bone during the match, this match had several importances to Sakuraba because it would declare who would be the contender for the middle weight championship match. Although Sakuraba’s attempted to brush off the damage his physician thought it would be best to forfeit the match to prevent further complications.
This fighting organization has many regulations, one being that fighters are to compete within their weight class. So that it may create a fair opportunity for both fighters. If a fighter decides he wants to fight a certain individual he would need to either to gain or lose weight to fight in another weight class.
Conclusion- Hence UFC is a safe sport.
Rebuttal
People may argue that the UFC does not provide a sport, just violence. This is a misconception.
Premise 1- the UFC earns a bad reputation from politicians
Evidence1- The negative perceptions of the sport is influenced by politicians such as Senator John McCain. In which He refers to the sport as "cock fighting". This shows he does not know much about the term cock fight as well as the UFC itself.
Evidence 2- Assemblyman Bob Reilly refers to the sport as "barbaric" and would think about accepting the UFC if fighters were to wear head gear. In doing this does he realize he would change the sport? What about boxing? There have been more incidents (like) in boxing than the UFC. Do you remember what had happen to Muhammad Ali? Boxing is a violent sport; he now suffers from Parkinson disease due to boxing. Need I remind you about the Miguel Cotto fight and Manny Pacquia fight?
Premise 2- People lack awareness of how the organization works.
Evidence 1- People are unaware that this sport has been ongoing throughout time, dating back to the Olympic Games in Athens to find the best fighter in the world. Ever since then this sport has been a forever growing organization adapting as time goes on for the fighters safety.
Evidence 2-There has been no deaths within the UFC. Some people are unaware that fighters have opportunity tap out, or withdraw from the fight. Also there are 31 restricted moves, and there are weight classes for safety precautions.
Conclusion- It follows that UFC has a bad reputation due to people’s ignorance.
Conclusion
Restate Argument- UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized within the State of New York.
Brief Summary/conclude- It is not a barbaric sport, the misconception of this opinion is due to how easily people are influenced by politicians and are also unaware of the inner workings of the sport.
Notes/Next steps: start constructing the paragraphs, as well as look for better transitional lines, to introduce the topic. Also work on thinking about another argument maybe.
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Outline For paper, but more to come
Alan Makar
Prof. McCormick
10 October 2010
Outline
Introduction
Argument-I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the State of New York.
Premise 1- Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport.
Premise 2- Given, the UFC has a code of conduct and rules.
Conclusion- It follows then, that the UFC is a safe sport
Brief History/ intro- In the past throughout history, our world that we have come to know has always had some sort of entertainment. We could have careless of how "violent" it really was. Rewinding to the past to ancient Greece people/citizens were put in a arena with beast twice the individual size for pure enjoyment/punishment. Did we care then? No, we just stood in suspense to see if the tables would be turned; the "man" would come out be a "warrior". As the philosopher Rousseau would say "Nature never deceives us; it is we who deceive ourselves", honestly we all want to see people compete because we, ourselves are not capable of competing on that level. We sometime foolishly abide with what maybe morally right to others rather than our thoughts. Remember the term "Gladiator"? Fierce warriors who competed in arm combat to see who would be last man standing. However, nowadays we have something similar an organization called "Ultimate Fighting Championship" (UFC). Where experienced martial artists/wrestlers, compete within an octagon. To be announced the "ultimate fighter"(within their weight class). Although this has been a long time sport in our history, New York has addressed it as being illegal within New York, for its violence which referred to as “Human cock fighting” as Senator John McCain would address it. But, this is misleading notion; in this essay I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the state of New York. Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport, given; the UFC has a code of conduct and rules. It then follows that the UFC is a safe sport.
Transition Sentence- The organization currently is trying to be legalized in New York.
Position
Premise 1- Codes of conduct and rules makes a safe sport.
Evidence 1- In karate, one must follow codes of conduct. One example is the “Bushido code”, which means the warrior spirit, is followed by karate and judo practitioners. There are 7 virtues: rectitude, courage, benevolence, respect, honesty, honor, and loyalty. Martial artist that accept that the 7 virtues create positive behavior.(Martial Art Hall of Warrior Training)
Evidence 2- In major league baseball, if a pitcher hits a batter 3 times in a game, he is ejected from the game for safety precautions of the players.
Premise 2- The UFC has codes of conduct and rules.
Evidence 1- During every match of the UFC, there is always a “cut-man” and physician. They work hand in hand. Cut-men have the authority to address the physician with concerns regarding an injury. If the physician believes the injury is threatening to the fighter the match will come to an end. Fighters are to respect the physician’s decision and cannot dispute the decision. The cut-man is, the person that heals the fighters cuts and applies the Vaseline on the fighter. The physician evaluates the health and condition of the fighter. (Goodman)
Evidence 2- This fighting organization has many regulations, one being that fighters are to compete within their weight class. So that it may create a fair opportunity for both fighters. If a fighter decides he wants to fight a certain individual he would need to either to gain or lose weight to fight in another weight class.
Conclusion- Hence UFC is a safe sport.
Rebuttal
People may argue that the UFC does not provide a sport, just violence. This is a misconception.
Premise 1- the UFC earns a bad reputation from politicians
Evidence1- The negative perceptions of the sport is influenced by politicians such as Senator John McCain. In which He refers to the sport as “cock fighting”. This shows he does not know much about the term cock fight as well as the UFC itself.
Evidence 2- Assemblyman Bob Reilly refers to the sport as “barbaric” and would think about accepting the UFC if fighters were to wear head gear. In doing this does he realize he would change the sport? What about boxing? There have been more incidents in boxing than the UFC. Do you remember what had happen to Muhammad Ali? Boxing is a violent sport; he now suffers from Parkinson disease due to boxing. Need I remind you about the Miguel Cotto fight and Manny Pacquia fight?
Premise 2- People lack awareness of how the organization works.
Evidence 1- People are unaware that this sport has been ongoing throughout time, dating back to the Olympic games in Athens to find the best fighter in the world. Ever since then this sport has been a forever growing organization adapting as time goes on for the fighters safety.
Evidence 2-There has been no deaths within the UFC. Some people are unaware that fighters have opportunity tap out, or withdraw from the fight. Also there are 31 restricted moves, and there are weight classes for safety precautions.
Conclusion- It follows that UFC has a bad reputation due to people’s ignorance.
Conclusion
Restate Argument- UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized within the State of New York.
Brief Summary/conclude- It is not a barbaric sport, the misconception of this opinion is due to how easily people are influenced by politicians and are also unaware of the inner workings of the sport.
Prof. McCormick
10 October 2010
Outline
Introduction
Argument-I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the State of New York.
Premise 1- Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport.
Premise 2- Given, the UFC has a code of conduct and rules.
Conclusion- It follows then, that the UFC is a safe sport
Brief History/ intro- In the past throughout history, our world that we have come to know has always had some sort of entertainment. We could have careless of how "violent" it really was. Rewinding to the past to ancient Greece people/citizens were put in a arena with beast twice the individual size for pure enjoyment/punishment. Did we care then? No, we just stood in suspense to see if the tables would be turned; the "man" would come out be a "warrior". As the philosopher Rousseau would say "Nature never deceives us; it is we who deceive ourselves", honestly we all want to see people compete because we, ourselves are not capable of competing on that level. We sometime foolishly abide with what maybe morally right to others rather than our thoughts. Remember the term "Gladiator"? Fierce warriors who competed in arm combat to see who would be last man standing. However, nowadays we have something similar an organization called "Ultimate Fighting Championship" (UFC). Where experienced martial artists/wrestlers, compete within an octagon. To be announced the "ultimate fighter"(within their weight class). Although this has been a long time sport in our history, New York has addressed it as being illegal within New York, for its violence which referred to as “Human cock fighting” as Senator John McCain would address it. But, this is misleading notion; in this essay I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the state of New York. Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport, given; the UFC has a code of conduct and rules. It then follows that the UFC is a safe sport.
Transition Sentence- The organization currently is trying to be legalized in New York.
Position
Premise 1- Codes of conduct and rules makes a safe sport.
Evidence 1- In karate, one must follow codes of conduct. One example is the “Bushido code”, which means the warrior spirit, is followed by karate and judo practitioners. There are 7 virtues: rectitude, courage, benevolence, respect, honesty, honor, and loyalty. Martial artist that accept that the 7 virtues create positive behavior.(Martial Art Hall of Warrior Training)
Evidence 2- In major league baseball, if a pitcher hits a batter 3 times in a game, he is ejected from the game for safety precautions of the players.
Premise 2- The UFC has codes of conduct and rules.
Evidence 1- During every match of the UFC, there is always a “cut-man” and physician. They work hand in hand. Cut-men have the authority to address the physician with concerns regarding an injury. If the physician believes the injury is threatening to the fighter the match will come to an end. Fighters are to respect the physician’s decision and cannot dispute the decision. The cut-man is, the person that heals the fighters cuts and applies the Vaseline on the fighter. The physician evaluates the health and condition of the fighter. (Goodman)
Evidence 2- This fighting organization has many regulations, one being that fighters are to compete within their weight class. So that it may create a fair opportunity for both fighters. If a fighter decides he wants to fight a certain individual he would need to either to gain or lose weight to fight in another weight class.
Conclusion- Hence UFC is a safe sport.
Rebuttal
People may argue that the UFC does not provide a sport, just violence. This is a misconception.
Premise 1- the UFC earns a bad reputation from politicians
Evidence1- The negative perceptions of the sport is influenced by politicians such as Senator John McCain. In which He refers to the sport as “cock fighting”. This shows he does not know much about the term cock fight as well as the UFC itself.
Evidence 2- Assemblyman Bob Reilly refers to the sport as “barbaric” and would think about accepting the UFC if fighters were to wear head gear. In doing this does he realize he would change the sport? What about boxing? There have been more incidents in boxing than the UFC. Do you remember what had happen to Muhammad Ali? Boxing is a violent sport; he now suffers from Parkinson disease due to boxing. Need I remind you about the Miguel Cotto fight and Manny Pacquia fight?
Premise 2- People lack awareness of how the organization works.
Evidence 1- People are unaware that this sport has been ongoing throughout time, dating back to the Olympic games in Athens to find the best fighter in the world. Ever since then this sport has been a forever growing organization adapting as time goes on for the fighters safety.
Evidence 2-There has been no deaths within the UFC. Some people are unaware that fighters have opportunity tap out, or withdraw from the fight. Also there are 31 restricted moves, and there are weight classes for safety precautions.
Conclusion- It follows that UFC has a bad reputation due to people’s ignorance.
Conclusion
Restate Argument- UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized within the State of New York.
Brief Summary/conclude- It is not a barbaric sport, the misconception of this opinion is due to how easily people are influenced by politicians and are also unaware of the inner workings of the sport.
Wednesday, October 6, 2010
Intro: "Violent? Pft, No Way"
In the past throughout history, our world that we have come to know has always had some sort of entertainment. We could have careless of how "violent" it really was. Rewinding to the past to ancient Greece people/citizens were put in a arena with beast twice the individual size for pure enjoyment/punishment. Did we care then? No, we just stood in suspense to see if the tables would be turned; the "man" would come out be a "warrior". As the philosopher Rousseau would say "Nature never deceives us; it is we who deceive ourselves", honestly we all want to see people compete because we, ourselves are not capable of competing on that level. We sometime foolishly abide with what maybe morally right to others rather than our thoughts. Remember the term "Gladiator"? Fierce warriors who competed in arm combat to see who would be last man standing. However, nowadays we have something similar an organization called "Ultimate Fighting Championship" (UFC). Where experienced martial artists/wrestlers, compete within an octagon. To be announced the "ultimate fighter"(within their weight class). Although this has been a long time sport in our history, New York has addressed it as being illegal within New York, for its violence which referred to as “Human cock fighting” as Senator John McCain would address it. But, this is misleading notion; in this essay I will argue that the UFC is an acceptably safe sport, therefore should be legalized in the state of New York. Codes of conduct and rules make a safe sport, given; the UFC has a code of conduct and rules. It then follows that the UFC is a safe sport.
Monday, October 4, 2010
Annotated bibliography
Annotated bibliography
· "UFC Rules and Regulations, Mixed Martial Arts Information, UFC Betting." UFC Betting, UFC Match Ups, Free UFC Picks, MMA Sports Betting. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.fighting-mma.com/ufc-rules-and-regulations.php>.
- This website contains the codes of conduct that are to be followed within a duel between both competitors. The site elaborates on 31 essential rules, I also checked a couple of other websites to verify the content was true.
· "About." Ultimate Fighting Championship. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.ufc.com/about>.
- This website will help me outline the background of the organization itself. Although it is somewhat basic it is still critical so i can introduce the topic.
· "YouTube - UFC's Channel." YouTube - Broadcast Yourself. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.youtube.com/user/UFC#g/c/C421BEF43F263384>.
- This is Dana White's video blog, I am sure that I am bound to find something worthy within his videos, to help me prove my thesis. In these video's not only does he talk about the fights itself but also his thoughts.
· Plotz, By David. "Fight Clubbed - By David Plotz." Slate Magazine. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.slate.com/id/46344/>.
- The article I chose will help fuel my rebuttals towards why UFC should be legalize. Although this individual does offer some issues where i must take into consideration.. I still think I am right haha. But i believe he somewhat sugar coats it with his descriptive details.
· "John McCain - Enter The Opportunist & Mixed Martial Arts Biggest Enemy." Free Articles | Submit Articles | Article Directory - ArticleClick.com. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.articleclick.com/Article/John-McCain-Enter-The-Opportunist-Mixed-Martial-Arts-Biggest-Enemy/967025>.
- I love this article, although I looked over the first paragraph it portrays how John McCain is a hypocrite. He is one of the UFC's biggest enemies, calling the sport "human cock fighting". This article will assist me on my thesis.
· Willis, By George. "UFC in New York State of Mind - NYPOST.com." New York News | Gossip | Sports | Entertainment | Photos - New York Post. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.nypost.com/p/sports/more_sports/ufc_in_new_york_state_of_mind_p6mypM53F8vlk9jkvaQV1L>.
- The article emphasizes on the upbringing of the sport to New York. They also inform the reader of how NY is eying the organization, in the sense of the business that will result from it.
· Lovett, By Kenneth. "UFC Back in New York? Gov. Paterson Wants to Legalize Ultimate Fighting - to Resolve Budget Crisis." New York News, Traffic, Sports, Weather, Photos, Entertainment, and Gossip - NY Daily News. Web. 04 Oct. 2010. <http://www.nydailynews.com/news/2010/01/11/2010-01-11_gov_wants_deficit_to_go_pow_bam_crunch.html>.
- Sweeeeet, who said politicians won't side with the UFC? The article shows how the city is willing to except the sport for the economic situation that is occurring. However, this shows there claim was not something they fully believed in. Stating that it was “violent" or "human cock fighting" shows also the priorities of the government as well.
· Snowden, Jonathan. Total MMA: inside Ultimate Fighting. Toronto: ECW, 2008. Print.
- This one my option for reading and getting insight to the sport. It may give me some thought of life inside the organization.
· I could not cite this one specifically however; I am trying to find someone in which I could interview. Hopefully, a fighter or someone within the organization. I heard that “Matt Serra” has a training camp in Staten Island and if that’s true maybe he is one of my options. For those who don’t know Matt Serra is a UFC competitor who has competed over 4 years or so.
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